Yo! What a week it’s been. The last one of the holiday (for some) so next week back to normal. I got to go back to my peer support training and my parent and baby group as well as signing off at the job centre (YES!).
Basically, this has all put me in an AMAZING mood which means that it will be much easier to edit the story I’m working on. Your comments have all been fabulously helpful, so I’m going to give you the next 250 words, immediately after last week’s snippet.
“Where were you?”
“Shops. We ran out of milk.”
The policeman made a note on the tatty pad of paper before him. “Did you leave anything on when you left?”
“What do you mean?”
He spread his hands in what was supposedly an explanatory gesture. “The oven? The kettle? The TV? Anything that could have started a fire.” His voice filled the room, lapping against the walls and rolling back into the space within like cresting waves. “It all started very quickly from what I can tell.”
Shrugging, Laicee returned her attention to the rough knot of wood on the table. She used her forefinger this time, picking at the wood as if the lever the rough spot free.
Small flakes of ash drifted to the surface as she lowered her head, falling from her hair like grey rain. She smeared it against the backs of her hands. “We ran out of milk.” She repeated. “So I popped out. I was only going to be five minutes, so I left everything on. Even the oven.”
Laicee looked up again, her gaze skimming past the officer sat opposite to his companion in the corner. She stared at him, willing him to speak. His silence made the hairs on the back of her neck prickle like ant’s feet. A bead of sweat rolled down her cheek and off the end of her chin. When it hit the table, she saw that it too was stained with soot.
“And you’re sure there was no one in the house?” The first officer leaned over the table. “Your husband?”
“No one.” She murmured.
As always thank you for stopping by and thank you for your comments. I’m deeply grateful for any and all suggestions, ideas and nit-picks you have; I welcome them. I hope my words in return as as useful to you as yours are to me.
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