Category: My Writing



15kinmay LogoWhile the beginning of this week started really well it went downhill towards the end. I should focus on the things that went well rather than beating myself up about perceived lack of progress, but this challenge is proving harder than I thought.

This time last week I was playing catch up. Today I’m still not quite where I ‘should’ be if I were keeping up to my daily word counts, but I’m further along than I thought I would be, which is handy.

As of today, but chart looks like this:15k In May Wordcount

Funky thermometer kindly supplied by Fundraiser Insight

This includes two short stories I wrote in the middle of last week and some flash fiction I hammered together. Since then I’ve been pretty focused on editing (making it very difficult to record new words) but since I’m getting items submitted to various places I can’t really complain.

This week I imagine that I’ll struggle to keep up the pace. I still feel rather poorly and I have to give more attention to The Write Feeling to get some work in. I also have more family visiting this week (woop!) so it’s going to be another busy one.

Meanwhile, the rest of the 15k crowd are still quietly plugging away. Why not hop over to them to see how they’re getting on?
Alison Wells
Dee Kirkby
Lisa Redmond
Lynne Collins
Maria Smith
Rinelle Grey
Ruth Livingstone
Wayne Kelly


This has been a considerably calmer week. Yes a couple of family visits (Dave’s side this time, not mine) but I still managed to get a couple of bits done. Nothing major, but I think it’s enough to stay on track. Which is all I wanted, really.

My chart at the moment looks like this:15k In May Wordcount

Funky thermometer kindly supplied by Fundraiser Insight

And hopefully I’ll be able to nudge that counter along a bit more in the coming week. I know it hasn’t moved all that much since my last update, but anyone keeping an eye on my Twitter feed (isn’t that all of you *innocent face*) will know that I’ve been editing furiously for the past three days.

A short story for a competition run by Writers Online. If you’re not familiar site then you really need to check them out. I subscribed to them, their newsletter and Writers Magazine last month and since then I’ve been experiencing such an incredible buzz. With each page I read, with every interview I enjoy, every tip I soak up, I can feel myself learning more and more. Couple that with the Phoenix Writers, you fine blog folk and my daily practise I can see the improvement in my words with every fresh one I write. Even my editing process has changed and I can feel that my eye for self editing has become sharper.

I don’t want to harp on about it too much (awww, go on, girlie!) but I’m so proud at my ruthlessness. At first draft my short story was 1,661 words. Second draft was 1,903 and I panicked on realising that the parameters stated 1,500 – 1,700. Fourth draft got the piece back down to 1,670 and then I somehow managed to take off even more! Less is more, people! I’ve never been so aware of how true that is. And applying my methods from The Write Feeling has made it snap. Now, I’m sure if I were to take the piece to group on Saturday, there would be a hell of a lot more I could do with it, but, given the tight deadline, I had to skip that this time.

Next month! Next month I will be more organised and write my story in good time to have it critiqued by my wonderful, wonderful group. I’m a little horrified at sending this off without having it looked at, but needs must. Next month, I’m going to get it super-duper right!

Anyway, now that I’ve rambled away from the 15k in May topic I’ll return there with no further ado.

Have you checked in with the rest of the crew? You should, if you haven’t; there’s a collection of lovely blogs out that that deserve your reading attention. :) If you need the reminder, here they are:
Maria Smith
Dee Kirkby
Wayne Kelly
Ruth Livingstone
Lynne Collins
Rinelle Grey
Alison Wells
Lisa Redmond

Do you have any challenges on the go? How is your month of May all panning out? :)


Button for blog hopJust so you know… the cake last week was AWESOME! My boys’ birthday was similarly fantastic and so was mine! ^_^ I used to worry about our birthdays all being crammed together, but it was actually really nice. And best yet, one of my birthday presents was a print of the poem I wrote for the boys, set on one of my favourite pictures of them.

Despite the #15kinMay challenge I haven’t done a great deal of writing this week, so, unfortunately I’ve not got anything for you to critique. I also stand by my earlier decision, in that if I haven’t kept up to date with comments, from the previous week, it’s not fair for me to post the following week.

So…! I’ll play catch up and see you all next time.

Meanwhile, I do hope you’ll stop in and see what the others are up to. Hopefully they’re all more organised than me!

http://mermaidssinging.wordpress.com/

http://caitlinsternwrites.wordpress.com/

http://ileandrayoung.com

http://jennykellerford.wordpress.com

http://jennifermeaton.com/

http://richardleonard.wordpress.com

http://jordannaeast.com

http://itsjennythewren.wordpress.com/

http://wehrismypen.wordpress.com

http://jlroeder.wordpress.com

http://letscutthecrap.wordpress.com/

http://ashortaday.wordpress.com

http://mandyevebarnett.com/

http://www.michellezieglerauthor.com

http://joeowensblog.wordpress.com/


Yes, this is a bit late. Oops. Probably should have posted this on Tuesday, but a combination of too many birthdays and general fatigue made it impossible. o.O Well, not impossible so much as I just didn’t feel like it. :p

I said I’d be taking part in the challenge; aiming to write 15,000 words in May. Well, despite the long procession of guests and celebrations I have been writing! Mainly on my phone and on paper (paper, what’s that?!) but it has been happening. When I kicked off last week I had 1,689 words by day two. Now, this is what my chart looks like.15k In May Wordcount

Funky thermometer kindly supplied by Fundraiser Insight

Phew! Not so bad then. :)

Also, it’s not just me mad enough to take part in this. I thought I’d point out some of the other mad folk taking part in the 15k in May word count challenge. Here they are:
Maria Smith
Dee Kirkby
Wayne Kelly
Ruth Livingstone
Lynne (In Peterborough)

I don’t think I’ve missed anybody, but if I have, give me a quick slap and I’ll add them on.

Hope you guys are all doing well and carefully, gleefully plugging away. Catch you next week! For another (hopefully on time) update!


Button for blog hopToday is all about cake baking and shopping lists ready for tomorrow. We’ve finally decided what to do for the boys’ birthday and are looking forward to a lovely garden party complete with food and drink. Whee!

I know I’ve been ‘late’ with this post quite often recently, but this week, that’s the excuse (and I’m sticking to it!).

Thanks for your comments last week. I haven’t done much with the piece yet, though I’d like to enter it somewhere, so I’m going to look at it as much as possible over the coming weeks. This week, however, I’m going to offer some more older stuff. I keep finding it and I’m so happy to see it that I’d like you to see it.

So… this piece is 198 words and the trigger word for it was Fleshware. Self contained flash fiction, I’d love to know what you think. :)

“How do I look?” Maxine twirled before the mirror.
“Beautiful.”
“You don’t think it’s too much?” She patted her cheeks and curled a section of hair behind her ear.
“No, it’s the perfect balance.” Lloyd’s reflection loomed into view at her shoulder. He leaned in to plant a kiss on the side of her neck. “It’s a good look on you.”
Beaming, Maxine turned away from the mirror and plucked a magazine from the desk. She gazed at the image there for a moment or two before dropping the whole thing into the bin. “I’ve always wanted to look like Halle Berry.”
“I prefer Kate Winslet, myself.”
Squeezing passed Lloyd, Maxine slapped his backside with her palm on the way to the door. “Just because you like red heads. I’ve always been partial to Ewan McGregor but you don’t catch me complaining.”
“What’s wrong with Colin Farrel?” He pouted.
“Nothing sweetheart.” She kissed his cheek. “Come on; we’re late.” She opened the door and gestured him through, pausing long enough to call to the empty air; “computer, shut down.”
A mechanical monotone replied, “Facial reconstruction complete. Fleshware 5000, shut down initiated.”
Maxine shut the laboratory door behind her.

As ever, visit here for the rules if you’d like to join and, meanwhile, hit these links below for what else is going on on the hop.

http://mermaidssinging.wordpress.com/

http://caitlinsternwrites.wordpress.com/

http://ileandrayoung.com

http://jennykellerford.wordpress.com

http://jennifermeaton.com/

http://richardleonard.wordpress.com

http://jordannaeast.com

http://itsjennythewren.wordpress.com/

http://wehrismypen.wordpress.com

http://jlroeder.wordpress.com

http://letscutthecrap.wordpress.com/

http://ashortaday.wordpress.com

http://mandyevebarnett.com/

http://www.michellezieglerauthor.com

http://joeowensblog.wordpress.com/

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